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Re: Please have a qualified proof reader verify the dialog

Posted: Fri Jul 09, 2010 12:52 am
by Lelldorianx
This is pretty silly. The game was fine, and the examples above are not anywhere near as bad as several dozen games I have written reviews for in the past. Talking about allegories serves no purpose here - the game (at least for me) read like a story book. It's a tale told to us (the listeners/players) by a more experienced party (the narrator), and as such deserves quirky Seuss-like dialogue. Oh well, I just wouldn't worry about it so much :)